PITCH+TREATMENT+FEEDBACK

Treatment: Things that I'm wanting to change about my piece is taken from a suggestion by adding dialogue in some of the projection scenes. This way I can make it more clear that the projections are an insight into the inner workings of her mind.

Feedback: Many said that they liked the main idea for my film and the themes that I want to represent. Also the terms of hyper-phantasia and thoughtography really interested people as well as the fact that I will be trying to appeal to a wide audience through the relatability of the character and her struggles.

Pitch: will be added here once i have the footage